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January 17, 2010

Stars don’t shine so brightly

At last, after many days spent preparing for the concert and trying to convince Stephanie that it wasn’t the end of the world that Jessica’s ticket was green, the much awaited night came. They all had to meet each other at the subway station, from which they would all go to the Bell Center, in Downtown Montreal.

 

They all had their own means of getting to the subway, two of them being brought there by their parents, but the other two, Lucia and Stephanie, went by bus together.

 

As they froze waiting for the bus to come, Stephanie was telling her friend how excited she was, gleaming in her bright purple coat.

 

“Oh, can you believe this?” she exclaimed, but before Lucia could answer, she continued. “I can’t believe this! This is incredible!”

 

The other girl smiled and looked up at the stars as Stephanie continued talking. “This is the most wonderful night ever,” she thought. “If only it wasn’t so freaking cold!” She shivered for the hundredth time, but kept smiling.

 

Just then, the bus arrived, interrupting Stephanie’s blabbering as well as Lucia’s thoughts. They both got on and paid their ticket. Lucia looked back at the ice and snow covered street thoughtfully before the vehicle’s door closed. She had the strange feeling that something was going to go wrong.

 

“What’s wrong?” her friend called out, already having taken a seat.

 

Lucia stared at Stephanie with a look of deep incomprehension.

 

“Nothing,” she mumbled, rather to herself than to anyone else, before going to sit next to her friend.

 

***

 

At the subway, Jessica and Virginie were waiting for the others impatiently, frowning at their watch. When Lucia and Stephanie finally arrived, they all got on a subway and left the station, entering the dark tunnel without saying a word. Then, out of the blue, they started talking to each other about the concert and how great it will be.

 

“Just imagine the date afterwards,” Jessica said happily. The other girls agreed, approving completely with what she had said, but none of them knew that when the moment that they have been waiting for so long would arrive, it wouldn’t be at all what they had expected.

 

When they got at the concert, they showed their tickets to the doorman, who smirked at them as he saw the V.I.P. letters written on the papers. Though, his smile seemed rather malicious than happy.

 

The girls frowned at each other when they passed the doorman, but didn’t say anything. What was there to say anyway?

 

At the Bell Center, there was excited screaming overlapped by the singers’ voices ringing through the darkness. They could barely see where they were going, for the only light came from a bunch of dim disco balls and the stage lights.

 

It was almost the Jonas Brother’s turn soon and Jessica couldn’t wait, while the rest of them were still for someone interesting to perform. The Jo Bros came on stage, provoking a bunch of screaming, Jess being one of the girls yelling their heads off.  

 

Then, when Jessica took a good look at them, she frown, confused. She stared at her friends, who weren’t paying any attention to the singers.

 

“Um, girls,” she told them. They shot her a questioning glance. “Those guys up there on stage… They aren’t the Jonas Brothers.”

 

Virginie grimaced and looked hastily at the performers. She peered up at them and watched them intently, trying to find out what was wrong. Then, it hit her: Jessica was right, it wasn’t the Jonas Brothers.

 

“Well, maybe it’s some kind of preview of them,” she said. “Maybe the actual stars come after.” Though, she didn’t seem sure as she glared at the fake singers.

 

Stephanie looked towards a group of stars sitting near the stage and noticed Taylor Lautner. “It’s not Taylor,” she yelled at her friends, trying to overlap the loud music. “He’s fake too!”

 

The girls started to be nervous. What was the meaning of this? Why wasn’t it the real stars? What was happening?

 

Just then, Green Day came on stage, followed by their singer, Billie Joe Armstrong. When Lucia and Virginie saw him, they nearly had a heart attack. It wasn’t the real Billie Joe either.

 

Part 4

 

The show was over and Stephanie, Jessica, Virginie and Lucia were all standing outside, staring at their ticket, trying to understand what wasn’t right. The, tired of glaring at a stupid piece of paper in the cold night, Stephanie went towards the doorman and exclaimed, completely outraged as she showed her V.I.P. ticket:

 

“WHAT is the meaning of this?! We have V.I.P. tickets to see REAL stars, not a bunch of people pretending to be gorgeous and being able to sing!”

 

The doorman, the one that let them in two hours ago, smiled at her, trying not to burst out laughing.

 

“Well, that’s your problem, because on the tickets, it’s clearly written that you’re going to meet the fake stars,” he replied, taking the ticket. He showed her a small almost impossible to read writing that said “fake”, just before Taylor Lautner’s name. “And by the looks of it, you’re going to have a date with those fake stars any minute now! I’ve got to go, so have fun!” The doorman grinned at her ironically and left, leaving her standing there, ticket in hand, gazing at it gloomily.

 

When Stephanie got back to her confused friends, she explained the situation in a sad tone, completely depressed. They had been waiting for this night for so long and now, they couldn’t do anything. It was all nothing but a stupid joke.

 

At that moment, the entrance door of the Bell Center smashed open as the fake Nick Jonas, Billie Joe Armstrong and Taylor Lautner got out of the building, all laughing and making an indescribable racket. They silenced when they got in front of the four sad-looking girls.

 

“Well, they don’t really look so happy, now do they, James?” the Nick Jonas impersonator said to one of them, shaking his head while the teenagers glared at them as if they were completely crazy.

 

“No, they don’t, Ben,” James (aka Billie Joe, but in a much younger version, about 20 years younger) replied with a strong, British accent. Then, turning towards the third one, the fake Taylor Lautner, said: “What shall we do, Peter? Aren’t they the girls we’re supposed to talk to, you know, the ones who won the contest? Shall we say anything to cheer them up?”

 

“Yes, we shall,” Peter answered, imitating James’ accent. 

 

They smiled foolishly at the contest winners, trying to find something to say. Virginie cut the silence saying:

 

“You know, you really don’t look like Billie Joe Armstrong.”

 

James burst out laughing.

 

“Of course I don’t. That’s not really the point.”

 

“Oh really, it’s not?”

 

James frowned and gave her question a thought. “No, actually, that is the point.” He looked away, confused, trying to understand why he got a job as a Billie Joe impersonator if he didn’t look anything like him.

 

“Well anyway,” Ben interrupted. “You’re supposed to have a “date” with us so…”

 

“Yeah, we know this great restaurant not far from here,” Peter continued. “We can walk until there. You girls want to come?”

 

Jessica, Stephanie and Virginie looked at each other, slightly surprised and seriously freaked out.

 

“Why not?” Lucia answered, as if there was nothing strange about going to eat at a restaurant with a bunch of Nick, Billie Joe and Taylor impersonators.

 

***

 

Surprisingly, the night went better than it would of have if James, Peter and Ben were actual stars. They were normal people, with the same kind of thoughts that the girls had and thanks to that, the whole thing didn’t seem awkward.

 

The three guys were actual musicians, but they weren’t even close of being famous. They were in the same band: Illusion Deadline. James was the singer, Peter was the drummer and Ben, the guitar player. They talked about their music, which was pretty much based on rock and punk, but Jessica discovered that Ben had a secret love for pop music. That kind of freaked out the rest of the band.

 

Still, the night was about music, even more than if it went as planned. But then again, maybe it did go as planned…

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My Stories

January 15, 2010

A Shadow’s Kiss

A Shadow's kiss... 

Skyla looked at Melaina, her fingertips pressed against her temples, her eyebrows locked into a frown and her lips tight. She couldn’t do it.

 

“I can’t do it,” she said, sighing and leaning back in her seat. “I can’t give you the answer to your question. You’ll have to come back another day. My powers can’t do anything for you now.”

 

Melaina grunted as she looked away. What good is it to visit a fortune teller if all it can say is: “Come back another day”? She shot the gypsy a frustrated look and the old woman responded with a shrug.

 

“Thanks anyway,” the girl muttered at Skyla The Fortune Teller and got up to her feet to leave the room.

 

Once outside, she slammed the door behind her and took a deep breath. Why couldn’t Skyla tell her future? The question was simple: “Will I fall in love soon?” It wasn’t so complicated!

 

Melaina looked at the sky and realised it was dark. She groaned. “Why is it so dark?” she thought. “It’s barely 5:00!” The young girl shook her frizzy hair off her face and looked up.

 

She saw a small human figure walking towards her that grew bigger and bigger as it approached. She narrowed her eyes, trying to see who it was, though she couldn’t say anything but it being a guy.

 

Wary, she looked away and started towards her home, but when she turned around, the figure was right behind her. Melaina stifled a scream of surprise.

 

She had seen right, it was a guy. A hot guy actually, with hair as curly as hers, but rather of a brownish back taint and dark brown eyes. They just stared at each other, Melaina having to look up, since he was quite taller than her.

 

“Hey,” the guy said, a small smile on his lips. “Alexander,” he added after a second of silence, reaching out his hand.

 

“Oh, hi!” Melaina replied, blushing slightly as she grabbed his hand and they shook. “I’m Melaina.”

 

They remained silent once again, her blue eyes in his.

 

“Yes, well, I got to go,” Alexander told her.

 

“What?” she said, confused and deceived.

 

“Don’t worry,” he answered, hushing her up by putting a finger over her lips. “We’ll meet again.” He gave her a charming smile and left.

 

“Hey! No, wait!”

 

But he was already gone, leaving her standing there, beneath a sky full of stars…

 

It’s been a month now and Melaina hasn’t seen Alexander. She had waited and waited, for what seemed forever, but he never showed up. Sometimes, she told herself it had all been nothing but a dream and every time she said that, a small light left her eyes and her shoulders slumped, all hope gone. Some days, she didn’t even care about eating; Alexander’s mysterious figure was all that occupied her mind.

 

Even if she knew nothing about him, for she had met him just once and maybe even that one time was only something she had imagined. Still, he was the voice that made her smile, the person who made her sing and the shadow that made her dream.

 

The girl thought about that as she walked one day, her fists clenched. She paid little attention to the humidity and the cold outside and to the compact fog that was gathering around her, lost in her thoughts.

 

Though, after a moment, she started to take interest in the tight mist. Melaina looked around her and realised that she couldn’t see anything because of the fog. She took a deep breath, trying not to panic and started thinking of a way of going back home. Out of reflex, she started backing up, as if she was confronted to a danger in front of her. And then, she bumped into someone.

 

Melaina spun around, surprised, and looked up, her eyes meeting those, wonderfully brown, of Alexander. She remained speechless, the thought of seeing the guy that made her lose herself once again paralysed her. The pounding of her heart was the only sound she could hear and for a second, she was worried that it was so loud he could hear it.

 

“Yeah, I can hear it,” he said suddenly, breaking the silence. “But that’s normal.”

 

“Normal?” Melaina asked, her voice nothing but a whisper that broke at the last syllable.

 

Alexander nodded. “Yes.”

 

Then, she asked him the question she couldn’t help asking: “Who are you?”

 

There was a pause as a mischievous dazzle passed through Alexander’s eyes. “Come. I’ll show you.” And he presented her his hand.

 

The young girl hesitated, staring at his hand.

 

“What?” he whispered softly. “Don’t you trust me?”

 

“No,” she thought, but refrained from telling him that. Of course she didn’t trust him. He was a complete stranger, no matter how hot he was, no matter how many shivers he sent through her spine. Still, curiosity made her take his hand and she ignored the faint smile of satisfaction that appeared on his lips.

 

Alexander led her through the thick mist, holding her hand. After several minutes, they arrived in front of a wonderful black Yamaha motorcycle, sparkling though there was no ray of light. They looked at each other and Melaina took advantage that moment to give him a confused look.

 

“What is the meaning of this?” she asked herself, frowning and then formulated her question aloud as he approached the vehicle and climbed on it.

 

“No questions, Mel,” he told her. “Just get on.”

 

Melaina put her hands on her hips and raised an eyebrow. “No helmets?”

 

“You won’t need it. Trust me,” he said.

 

She shrugged and climbed on the engine behind him. “I hope you know what you’re doing” she sighed, wrapping her arms around his waist.

 

“Of course I do.”

 

And before she had the time to realise what was happening, they sprinted forward, the air rushing trough their hair, surrounded by darkness.

 

 

***

 

“What is this place,” Melaina inquired, suspicious. “Why did you bring me here?” She looked at the dark ocean that lay below the cliff on which she was stand on. She turned around briskly to stare at Alexander, who was half sitting on the motorcycle, his legs crossed.

 

“This is the place where I live,” he answered finally, as if it were obvious.

 

“What? How could you possibly live here? This is only made of rocks and water, there’s no way this is your home.”

“It’s not like I need anything more.”

 

There was a silence between the two of them. Then, Melaina exploded.

 

“Will you end up telling me what all of this is about?! You’re all dark and mysterious and… and rather handsome… But that’s not the point! You think this is just about you being charming? Well let me tell you that it’s not going to be like that!”

 

Alexander smirked at her, amused. “Really? And you’re sure about that? Well what I’d like to know is what the problem about me living here is.”

 

“Well… I… I don’t know. It’s just that… It’s completely impossible! How can this,” she showed the cliff and the ocean, “be you’re home?”

 

He crossed his arms and stared at her, smiling. Then, after a moment, his smile faded as he looked at the dark water. “I’m a Shadow, Melaina. I don’t really exist. Well, I do, but… nobody really knows that. Except you.” He looked at her seriously.

 

“And let me guess,” Melaina said. “You want me to help you.”

 

“Yeah. Kinda. I actually do. I want you to let me kiss you.”

 

There was a silence as they glared at each other, Alexander being malicious and Melaina being, in some way, completely furious.

 

“Are you serious?” she asked him in a deadly tone. “I don’t think that it works that way.”

 

“Actually, it does,” he replied sliding his arm around her waist. He lifted her chin up gently and as she was about to push him away, a low chuckling noise sounded. Then, a metallic rustling made them shiver and Alexander frowned, taking her hand and murmuring hastily to Melaina to follow him.

 

The girl obeyed and they ran furtively through a land of tall grass, wind blowing violently in their faces, as it started to rain, like that, out of the blue.

 

“What is happening?” Melaina yelled at the Shadow.

 

“Black Shadows,” he answered, continuing to run. “Shadows that spent so much time in their loneliness that they turned black with anger… They forgot what it’s like to be human.”

 

Suddenly, ten dark shadows appeared in front of them, making them stop in their tracks. “What the heck is this?!” Melaina whispered to herself. “Are we in Hell?”

 

Alexander pulled her in another direction and they kept running from the dark silhouettes of Shadows. After minutes of running, when Melaina was out of breath, they arrived at the end of a second cliff. Down, there was another ocean that was just as black as the first one.

 

“Oh my God, what are we going to-” she gasped, but as she was saying that, they were jumping off the cliff and into the dark, icy water. The coldness froze Melaina and she couldn’t think anymore, nothing was real. Nothing but the cold that stuck to her skin, to her soul like glue. And then, suddenly, she opened her eyes. She expected to see wild waves and ice, but instead she saw the greyish stone of a cave’s wall. Melaina frowned and sat up, lying against the wall behind her. She took her breath and closed her eyes again. This couldn’t be happening. Next to her, there was Alexander, smiling like always.

 

 “Well that wasn’t so bad, now was it?” he joked, his eyes sparkling wildly.

 

Before she could say anything, the sinister figures appeared again and approached menacingly. Then, without saying a word, Alexander put his arm around her waist again, pushed a wet lock of her hair out of her face and kissed her gently.

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Français

January 10, 2010

“Quelqu’un m’a dit” de Carla Bruni

CD de Carla Bruni

On me dit que nos vies ne valent pas grand-chose,
Elles passent en un instant comme fanent les roses.
On me dit que le temps qui glisse est un salaud
Que de nos chagrins, il s’en fait des manteaux
Pourtant quelqu’un m’a dit…

 

Refrain
Que tu m’aimais encore,
C’est quelqu’un qui m’a dit que tu m’aimais encore.
Serais ce possible alors ?

 

On me dit que le destin se moque bien de nous
Qu’il ne nous donne rien et qu’il nous promet tout
Parait qu’le bonheur est à portée de main,
Alors on tend la main et on se retrouve fou
Pourtant quelqu’un m’a dit …

 

Refrain
Que tu m’aimais encore,
C’est quelqu’un qui m’a dit que tu m’aimais encore.
Serais ce possible alors ?

 

Mais qui est ce qui m’a dit que toujours tu m’aimais?
Je ne me souviens plus c’était tard dans la nuit,
J’entends encore la voix, mais je ne vois plus les traits
“Il vous aime, c’est secret, lui dites pas que j’vous l’ai dit”
Tu vois quelqu’un m’a dit…

 

Que tu m’aimais encore, me l’a t’on vraiment dit…
Que tu m’aimais encore, serais ce possible alors ?

 

On me dit que nos vies ne valent pas grand chose,
Elles passent en un instant comme fanent les roses
On me dit que le temps qui glisse est un salaud
Que de nos tristesses il s’en fait des manteaux,
Pourtant quelqu’un m’a dit…

 

Que tu m’aimais encore,
C’est quelqu’un qui m’a dit que tu m’aimais encore.
Serais ce possible alors ?

 

Auteur, compositeur et interprète: Carla Bruni
Année: 2002
Lieu d’origine: Turin, Italie

 

Cette chanson, c’est « Quelqu’un m’a dit » de Carla Bruni. Cette artiste est l’auteure, la compositrice et l’interprète de la chanson. Elle était aussi mannequin en France pendant 10 ans et elle est justement mariée au président de ce pays, Nicholas Sarkozy, depuis 2008. Même si elle habite en France depuis l’âge de sept ans, elle vient d’Italie, plus précisément de Turin, où elle est née le 23 décembre 1967. Elle a joué un rôle dans le film « Catwalk » ainsi que dans « Paparazzi ». Après avoir tourné ces films, elle a arrêté d’être mannequin, à l’âge de 29 ans, afin de mieux se concentrer sur la musique.

 

Des fois, une chanson, si on ne l’écoute qu’une fois, elle ne peut être rien d’autre qu’un ramassis de notes de musique, suivies d’autres notes de musique. Mais d’autres fois, au contraire, une chanson peut te faire arrêter peu importe ce que tu faisais, rien que pour écouter. Je le dis tout de suite, je ne suis pas vraiment une fanatique de la musique française. Je ne connaissais aucun chanteur français, à part peut-être Céline Dion, et encore là, je ne la connais que parce qu’elle chante en anglais aussi. Alors, je n’avais aucune idée de qui choisir. Donc, j’ai pris la liste des chanteurs interprètes que Mme. Fortin nous a donnée, j’ai choisi quelqu’un au hasard et je suis allée écouter sa musique. Et étrangement, même s’il y a quelque chose qui sonnait faux dans la voix de l’interprète, dans sa façon de chanter, cette musique m’a fait arrêter, rien que pour écouter.

 

Cette chanson, elle parle d’une jeune femme qui semble avoir eu beaucoup de moments difficiles avec un homme et qui en souffre, surtout parce qu’elle a fini par ne plus « sortir » avec cette personne. On peut sentir ce désarroi quand elle parle de ce qu’elle pensait de la vie, du temps, du destin. Et soudain, une nuit, elle a l’impression que son petit ami l’aime encore. Elle représente cette impression en disant que c’est quelqu’un qui lui avait dit qu’il l’aimait encore. Ce qui est intéressant, c’est la façon dont la chanteuse relate le moment quand elle entend ce « quelqu’un », car elle renvoie toute une image. Elle dit que c’est la nuit, donc on imagine immédiatement du noir, une pièce sombre. Et on peut presque voir quelqu’un lui chuchoter à l’oreille. Et justement l’obscurité aide à comprendre la lueur d’espoir qui jaillit en la jeune femme lorsqu’elle entend que le garçon l’aime encore. Cette lueur, on peut presque l’imaginer briller dans l’obscurité. Ce qui joue avec le sens de la vue.

 

On sent la tristesse qu’elle émane et quelque chose dans le ton de la chanteuse, à un moment donné, montre qu’elle commence à se convaincre que tout n’est peut-être pas fini. Tout au long de la chanson, elle se questionne sur ce qu’elle avait entendu, elle se demande si elle devrait y croire.

 

Et il y a aussi les métaphores, les comparaisons, les façons d’interpréter certaines choses dans la vie. Il n’y en a pas beaucoup, mais souvent, la qualité est préférable à la quantité, car les métaphores qui sont dans ces paroles peuvent faire sourire si on les écoute vraiment. Ces comparaisons disent des choses qui peuvent parfois vous faire hocher la tête en accord avec la vérité des mots. Par exemple, dans le premier couplet, on traite le temps de salaud et je trouve que c’est vrai parce que des fois, il passe beaucoup trop vite et on ne s’en rend même pas compte. En fait, je pense que c’est ce que l’auteure voulait insinuer en disant ça. Aussi, j’adore la façon qu’on représente le destin et le bonheur à un moment donné dans la chanson. Carla Bruni dit et je cite : « On me dit que le destin se moque bien de nous, qu’il ne nous donne rien et qu’il nous promet tout, parait qu’le bonheur est à portée de main, alors on tend la main et on se retrouve fou. » Ce que je trouve quand même assez représentatif et bien dit, surtout que ça sonne poétique.

 

Cette chanson est une ballade dont les paroles forment un texte esthétique, c’est surtout un texte qui exprime des émotions représentées avec des phrases écrites pour que l’on trouve la chanson poétique. Les rimes sont majoritairement suivies, mais il arrive que ce soit des rimes croisées, quoique c’est plus rare.

 

Une autre chose que j’aime de « Quelqu’un m’a dit », c’est que c’est une chanson qui parle d’amour. Et des chansons d’amour, il y en a plein, j’en connais beaucoup et vous aussi, vous en connaissez beaucoup. Mais étrangement, ça ne sonne pas vraiment « cliché », ce n’est pas banal. Je pense que ce qui aide à améliorer l’authenticité de la chanson, ce sont les paroles : « pourtant quelqu’un m’a dit que tu m’aimais encore ». C’est en fait ma partie préférée de toute la pièce, celle qui me dit vraiment quelque chose. C’est cette phrase qui donne le sujet de la chanson parce que vous savez, il y a plusieurs façons de parler d’amour dans une chanson et cette façon là, je ne l’ai jamais vraiment rencontrée dans une pièce musicale jusqu’à maintenant.

 

Pour moi, quelque chose dans cette chanson est incroyable, même si certaines personnes peuvent mal interpréter le côté maladroit de cette chanson, le rythme irrégulier des paroles, les tons légèrement faux, la mélodie simple jouée à la guitare. Mais les paroles… Les paroles, c’est comme si je les comprends, mais en même temps, elles me donnent l’impression de n’être qu’une étrangère pour elles, qu’une personne qui ne comprend rien du tout. Mais au fond, la poésie fait toujours ça.

 

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